tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6744906746192568003.post6247932232264947139..comments2024-03-28T08:18:04.912-04:00Comments on Prince Snow Farm: Chapter Oneprince snow farmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14171423443511809026noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6744906746192568003.post-72019228569248769722009-08-14T18:45:16.812-04:002009-08-14T18:45:16.812-04:00I would also like to read more!I would also like to read more!Kathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10402127593274759760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6744906746192568003.post-32839565343407324742009-08-14T11:29:32.180-04:002009-08-14T11:29:32.180-04:00I want to read more! Very well done!I want to read more! Very well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6744906746192568003.post-6895551202071594142009-08-14T10:42:42.776-04:002009-08-14T10:42:42.776-04:00Your description of her taking a deep breath, lung...Your description of her taking a deep breath, lungs filling with the salty air, instantly brings me back to my times on the Cape.<br /><br />Good writing transports you to another place. I look forward to reading more - Good job !JulesTXhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13534396283127241370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6744906746192568003.post-44570382942582405182009-08-14T09:01:45.936-04:002009-08-14T09:01:45.936-04:00Believe me, this does not SUCK! I want to read mor...Believe me, this does not SUCK! I want to read more. Thanks for sharing!Ginnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10639212842022641538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6744906746192568003.post-78785908562107693222009-08-13T23:43:14.595-04:002009-08-13T23:43:14.595-04:00I liked it a lot. I normally prefer first-person ...I liked it a lot. I normally prefer first-person stories, but will engage myself in third-person stories when I know the writing is well-done.<br /><br />And here is how I KNEW this was well-written. This line:<br /> Daylight seemed to hang by a thread, knowing that a promise was at stake.<br /><br /><br />GORGEOUS imagery. <br /><br />Thank you for putting this out here for all of us to see.<br /><br />I look forward to the rest of the chapters.dinagideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17892195449655319256noreply@blogger.com